Paragraphs

We have been learning on how to improve our paragraphs.
This is my finished product.

Makariki also was known as the group of seven stars. Nowadays Matariki occurs on the last few days of may. This event is a great time to harvest. At the time of Matariki it is great is talk and reflect on the past

What went well today? We Did a lot of work
Is there anything you need Help with? Na fam
What didn't go well today? Nothing
How will you improve? Doing the responses

social studies

what went well today did work
what didn't go well didn't finish
need help   no
what will you improve on    finish

what went well: work
nothing

social studies

what went well today?   finished work
Is there anything you need help with?    Nah fam
What didn't go well today?  i didnt take a picture
How will you improve on that next lesson  take a picture

social studies

what went well today?    did work
Is there anything you need help with?    Nah fam
What didn't go well today?   didnt finish
How will you improve on that next lesson      finishing what i started